John-Young's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cooling Down]

I love the colour contrast you have used here

Capacia responds:

Thank you very much.

[wanna do something crazy❗❤]

Brilliant image. Fantastic texture and pose.

Just one small thing. I assume it is Deadpool is speaking first? If so his speech bubble needs to be higher than Harleys. It looks as if she is answering before he asks. II hope this makes sense?

[Crazylove]

Hi am a big fan of detail and really love this piece. I particularly like the way you made it look like a polaroid. In terms of critique as requested. I would say harley could do with some more detail on the face to make here more rounded. She feels a tad flat compared to the rest of the image. I hope this is helpful?

SwatJack responds:

Thank you. Thats very helpful. I feel same way about her, just had to be sure :P

[Crazy Love]

Hi, I really like your piece. It's very cute. If I may be so bold to suggest adding a little more depth to the colour and shading. I don't it needs too much but I personally want you to have the best chance to win and your piece feels a little unfinished.
Please try to check out Will Terry's art, he is a digital artist but it may help you. But otherwise, it's a really lovely painting and best of luck.

KMojica responds:

Thank you so much for the feedback. I have already submitted it so I do not want to change it (id feel I cheated a bit) but I will definitely take the suggestions and carry them over to my next pieces! I appreciate the advice!

[Ghouls'n Ghosts, New Resolution.]

Great job. I really love the detail on the sword and armour

Dharkside responds:

Thank you John, I appreciate the feedback you have given me!

[Sunset Assassin - January COTM 'New Resolution' 2016]

Nice. I love how this feels like a real Japanese temple

BlueHeatwave responds:

Thanks man! Tried to use my creative license to give it that Japanese atmosphere whilst not taking too many liberties with the design! Glad you like it :)

[Mario vs Bowser Super Mario Bros. 3]

Yeah like the other guys this is a great design and appreciate you have used your own style, However, Jazza was very specific about not changing the angle. We have to all stick to the parameters of the competition to qualify for entry. Sorry dude I have to agree with the other guys :(

[Dig Thug (NewRes)]

Just noticed the spiderman fingers. Nice touch.

[Dig Thug]

LOL

[Space Invaders]

I really like the imagination used for creating your space invader. Did you do just the one or the whole fleet?